OMGGGG, waterdrooopsss in all kinds, forms and environmentsssss!
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Inspiration from the song Rain, by Breaking Benjamin. Go listen to it sometime :3
Anyway, this is another drawing for Toby, though it definitely doesn't do him any justice whatsoever. I really need to draw him something that's worth looking at ;____; This also introduces a new character [that I've had for a while now]. Her name is Mina and she's a door mouse ^_^ No critique is necessary, though I'm sure you'd like to point out the many things about this drawing - of which I already know - is wrong! The grass and perspective, for example!! Sooooo ... see you in another few months!! X3 But seriously, I'll try to update more often now Mina and drawing © *KiTSUNEMAGiC1 Jackie © `tobyf |
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but I cant help but notice that you 'didnt stay between the lines' on one of the leaves, there is a non-full-opacity-green coming out of the leaf over the blue (:
but really, worth the
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And thanks again for pointing that out, I'll make sure to watch for that next time
but just like my skin is fugly and irregular, it doesnt mean it isnt beautiful (well, my skin pisses me off whenever I look in the mirror and see a model-shaped-acné-skin >.>
but here, it could 'work' tpoo, if it were more regular
srry it is 23:26 here... >>
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No worries ^-^
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being is doing
i love how happy and.. well, just plain cute it is^^
heheh.
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BREAKNECK BANDITZ
'We just sound good together.'
The waterdrops are a bit scribbly in my opinion - especially the water behind them; it looks a little slimy instead of water-y
Mina is adorable; I like the metallic look and the colours of the little locket on her. Personally I think the outlines on her mouth are a bit too thick, as I think it makes it stand out a bit too much; compare it to Jackie, the plants, the fence; they all do without outlines ^^ Another thing you could try is putting her eyes a bit higher, or making them higher - especially with her fur markings, they look just a wee bit too small compared to her head - but maybe that's just me
I adore the way you drew Jackie - he looks wonderful in your style. The ears, the wings, the shading on him, especially around his feet and the tail - you've definitely outdone yourself on him
The grass looks nice too, and really, don't worry about confusing people
Besides, look at how little I post
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Tobias Fischer (tobyf)
Drawings, Friends ^-^
And thanks sooo so much for all the comments and critiques, I'll keep all of them in mind the next time I'm drawing ^-^
I wouldn't worry about posting drawings if I were you - you're busy enough already with all sorts of other stuff
Ooooh, a favorite from Toby? *-* What an honor!! ~^^~
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