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Inspiration from the song Rain, by Breaking Benjamin. Go listen to it sometime :3

Anyway, this is another drawing for Toby, though it definitely doesn't do him any justice whatsoever. I really need to draw him something that's worth looking at ;____;

This also introduces a new character [that I've had for a while now]. Her name is Mina and she's a door mouse ^_^

No critique is necessary, though I'm sure you'd like to point out the many things about this drawing - of which I already know - is wrong! The grass and perspective, for example!!

Sooooo ... see you in another few months!! X3 But seriously, I'll try to update more often now ^^;

Mina and drawing © *KiTSUNEMAGiC1
Jackie © `tobyf
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Mood: Adoration ~tsemalon Jul 28, 2008
I agree with everything toby said =D and I recognsed it like, immediately ^_^

but I cant help but notice that you 'didnt stay between the lines' on one of the leaves, there is a non-full-opacity-green coming out of the leaf over the blue (:
but really, worth the :+fav:

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"Bacteria: The only culture some people have."
~sunsetstock for all your sunset background needs :lol:
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Mood: Thanks ~KiTSUNEMAGiC1 Jul 29, 2008
Thank you very much for the favorite ^^

And thanks again for pointing that out, I'll make sure to watch for that next time :nod:
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~tsemalon Jul 29, 2008
it could be really cool, Im not saying it aint good, but it is just that other leaves dont have it and it felt like an irregularity...
but just like my skin is fugly and irregular, it doesnt mean it isnt beautiful (well, my skin pisses me off whenever I look in the mirror and see a model-shaped-acné-skin >.>;)
but here, it could 'work' tpoo, if it were more regular :D

srry it is 23:26 here... >>

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"Bacteria: The only culture some people have."
~sunsetstock for all your sunset background needs :lol:
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~KiTSUNEMAGiC1 Jul 29, 2008
well, it wasn't intentional x3 I'll just make sure all my lines are ... non-transparent? :giggle:

No worries ^-^
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*DawnFrost Jul 18, 2008  Student Digital Artist
aww its cute ^^ :D i love the dew and clouds the best in this picture, they come out looking really cool =]
:glomp: welcome back btw

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"The sky's untouched without the reach,
The dream's no good without the dare,
And one must fight for what he wants,
'Tis purpose God attends, not prayer."
-Gilbert of Glockenspur
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~KiTSUNEMAGiC1 Jul 19, 2008
Thanks ^-^

:glomp: :giggle:
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~AnimeLuver16 Jul 17, 2008
awwwwwwww~ its sooo cuttteeeeeee~~~~
i love how happy and.. well, just plain cute it is^^
heheh.

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BREAKNECK BANDITZ
'We just sound good together.'
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~KiTSUNEMAGiC1 Jul 18, 2008
Thanks, nii-chan :hug:
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Mood: Affection `tobyf Jul 17, 2008
Aww, thank you so much for this *clings* :hug: I didn't expect that you'd finish it that soon, buut yeah, it definitely has come a long way, and it looks great! ^-^ The cornfields look like they must have been a lot of work - they are drawn reeeally realistically though, so it definitely paid off ^^ Same goes for lightening and the texture on the fence - they are awesome, and way better than anything I'd have come up with :aww:
The waterdrops are a bit scribbly in my opinion - especially the water behind them; it looks a little slimy instead of water-y ;P The drops themselves look very well done though, the reflections are bright and realistic, and their transparency adds a lot too ^-^ The sky and the sun look fine; I like how soft and puffy the clouds are; their colours are calm and fit the scenery very well.
Mina is adorable; I like the metallic look and the colours of the little locket on her. Personally I think the outlines on her mouth are a bit too thick, as I think it makes it stand out a bit too much; compare it to Jackie, the plants, the fence; they all do without outlines ^^ Another thing you could try is putting her eyes a bit higher, or making them higher - especially with her fur markings, they look just a wee bit too small compared to her head - but maybe that's just me :giggle: Apart from that she looks great, the fur is realistic and same goes for your choice of colours.
I adore the way you drew Jackie - he looks wonderful in your style. The ears, the wings, the shading on him, especially around his feet and the tail - you've definitely outdone yourself on him :clap: The colouring is really smooth, and the shading on him looks just perfect - the way you've drawn and shaded him is a big highlight of the picture (just as much as the fence, the cornfield and everything else - they're great just as well *-*), and definitely looks way better than anything I've ever drawn of him ^^
The grass looks nice too, and really, don't worry about confusing people ;P I don't mind your style being really similar to mine (in fact, I like the style, otherwise I'd not draw in it ;3) - and that's in addition to the fact that yours has its own little twist to it - characters you draw look a loooot cuter than if I had drawn them - that starts with that drawing you printed on the mug, and continues on here.

Besides, look at how little I post ;P Someone of us has to keep posting!!

:+fav: - colouring and texture, rendition and shading of Jackie.

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Tobias Fischer (tobyf)
Drawings, Friends ^-^
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Mood: Adoration ~KiTSUNEMAGiC1 Jul 18, 2008
You know you deserve it! *clings back* <3 Trust me, I didn't expect to finish it that fast either, but it just kinda .. ended up that way X3 Especially with the corn fields - I nearly got a cramp from drawing every strand in there X3 But it turned out alright in the end, I think ^^

And thanks sooo so much for all the comments and critiques, I'll keep all of them in mind the next time I'm drawing ^-^

I wouldn't worry about posting drawings if I were you - you're busy enough already with all sorts of other stuff ;P

Ooooh, a favorite from Toby? *-* What an honor!! ~^^~
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